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Thoedore Lowry of Story Paths's avatar

Lovely! I especially like that you wove shame into this vision of the future, a bold move that gives shame a place with more positive motions. And your singing and reworking of amazing grace fits roundly at the end.

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Melissa Elvira Billington's avatar

Thank you so much for making the time to read/listen and even beyond that to respond! I'm keen to explore your Story Paths as well. I'm also curious what you might make of this piece: https://melissaelvirabillington.substack.com/p/ice-can-burn

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